Editing the Essay

The essay while editing there where some things that stood out to me generally i realised that my points where clear on what i wanted to say but they were not as easy to understand as i wanted it to be. Paragraph 1,2 are really clear on how it relates to the issue but paragraph 3 has a weaker link to the macro-thesis or main point. However there was nothing in the essay that was irrelevant but some parts that where not as needed or crucial to the essay in general. Paragraph 3 is not a clear as i expected it to be but it was within by accepted range of error. Also Im happy that Im within 100 words of the target amount

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